My first professional critique has certain spurred me on; I submitted my synopsis, and the first three chapters of my current work, The Little Servant – the Wait’s Son. Regular followers will remember that this is the first book in a trilogy of novels set in the medieval period.
The edited highlights of this review were:-
Very well written, right from the beginning
Emotive and page-turning
Sophisticated use of simile and metaphor
Wonderfully descriptive; a perfect balance
Successful in forcing the reader to ask questions and want to find the answers
Seemingly well researched and formulated
A believable time and setting
The writer excels in the descriptive narrative of the story
There are skilful changes of points of view throughout the story
Very pleased.
Janet Stock 